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Wordiness: Chuck the Dead Wood

Clue Fourteen

Release Date: 03/31/2023

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At Lake Superior College, there are students from all over the world.  Many of them have a Primary Language that is not English, yet here, they must speak, listen, read, and write in English.  That they are successful, and they are, is absolutely amazing.  Kirsi Halonen, LSC English Instructor, was once one such student, and here she:  Explains ways that languages, like her native Finnish, are fundamentally different from English, and how she still struggles with some things today.  Recalls the things that helped her become a fluent English speaker.  ...

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As we know from an earlier episode with Amy Jo Swing, this English language comes from...England. OK. Pretty obvious, but in this episode, British expatriate Nicola Scott from LSC’s Tutoring and Learning Center unpacks for us what she learned about writing back in her school days. It’s kind of surprising:  That what we would call high school (secondary school) ends much younger there.  That after secondary school, there is literally no parallel thing to our College Composition.   That Nicola really thinks College Composition courses are a great...

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In this episode, poet and LSC English instructor Amy Jo Swing is going to help us uncover wordiness You know, when we’re using words we just don’t need Listen for these clues: 

  1. Chuck the dead wood. 

  1. Avoid Passive Voice. 

  1. There are better words, so use ‘em. 

Amy Jo will expand on those ideas and more, so listen in.