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The Apprentice Who Dazzles

Storyfeather

Release Date: 12/05/2025

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A self-help instructor helps himself to the most dazzling part of his newest protégé…her soul.

Genre: Fantasy, Horror, Mystery

 

Excerpt:
This ‘man who dazzles’ seemed to be the real deal.  Under the smoothed down hair, and the pressed suits, and the glinting gold cuff links, the rings, the chains, and that slight brush of coppery glitter just at his temples, there was substance. 

There was a man who could teach others to dazzle as well. I wanted to meet him and talk to him.

 

The Wheel of Fiction Turns. What did it land on this time?
Each Season 9 story follows a theme chosen by the Wheel of Fiction. Thirteen spokes. Eight are the themes from previous seasons. One is “Turn Again.” One is a wild card. And three are covered in question marks and will be revealed when the wheel lands on them.

This episode landed on REVISITATION.

See a story trailer and a (satisfying) video of the wheel turning here: The Apprentice Who Dazzles

 

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CREDITS
Story: The Apprentice Who Dazzles” Copyright © 2022 by Nila L. Patel
Narration, Episode Art, Editing, and Production:  Nila L. Patel

 

Music:
“Abstract Vision #5” by ANDREW SITKOV (Intro & Outro)
“Try Anything Once” by LEE ROSEVERE (Outro)

 

Music by LEE ROSEVERE
“Baldachin”
“Try Anything Once”
“It’s A Mystery”
“Heat Haze”
“Slow Lights”
“Under Suspicion”
“Thoughtful”
“Small Steps”
“How I Used To See The Stars”

 

Music by Andrew Sitkov is licensed from GameDev Market
Music by Lee Rosevere is licensed under CC BY 4.0
Vocal effects created with Audacity
Changes made to the musical tracks? Just cropping of some to align with my narration.

 

Find more music by Andrew Sitkov at gamedevmarket.net
Find more music by Lee Rosevere at freemusicarchive.org/music/lee-rosevere and leerosevere.bandcamp.com
Find more stories by Nila at storyfeather.com

 

Episode Art Description:
Digital drawing. At center, a man seen from thighs up, facing forward with head raised up, eyes and mouth slightly parted. He wears a sparkling shirt with a ruffled front, fancy cuffs, and ornate belt. A sparkling half-cape hangs from his left shoulder and is tied over his right shoulder. His right arm is bent, hand raised to his temple. A dangling earring with linked golden hoops hangs from his left ear. His shoulder-length hair is loosely pinned behind the ear. Watermark of “Storyfeather” along the right side of his torso.