Write, Writer, Write!
If you want to be a writer, you’ve got to write. It may sound simple, but sometimes, it’s not that easy. Join author, editor, and story coach Deborah Froese for Write, Writer, Write! a short, to-the-point podcast for time-crunched writers who want to improve their craft and their productivity.
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Episode 32: Three Acts of Revision, ACT III, Rewrite
03/09/2026
Episode 32: Three Acts of Revision, ACT III, Rewrite
This episode explores how to rewrite a manuscript effectively by revising one layer at a time. In the final episode of the Three Acts of Revision series, Deborah Froese explains the process of rewriting in layers. Instead of trying to fix everything at once, writers move through focused editorial passes that strengthen the structure, clarity, and momentum of the manuscript before polishing the language. Along the way, she shares practical tools to help writers stay organized, maintain confidence, and keep moving forward even when revision feels uncertain. Topics in this episode include: manuscript revision process rewriting a manuscript developmental editing writing craft and structure revision mindset Write, Writer, Write! is a short podcast for writers who want to shape their mindset for productivity and growth, improve their craft, and increase the impact of their writing. Subscribe for new episodes on the craft of writing and the creative life. CONNECT The Fully Human Writer | CREDITS Cover Image by ChatGPT Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from Stamp Sound Effect by from
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Episode 31: Three Acts of Revision, ACT III, Plan
03/02/2026
Episode 31: Three Acts of Revision, ACT III, Plan
SHOW NOTES This is Part Two of the Three Acts of Revision series. You’ve read your draft like a reader. Now it’s time to evaluate what you found. In this episode, the SCOPE method of revision planning identifies strengths, uncovers structural weaknesses such as story structure, character arcs, argument flow, and momentum—and it helps you determine how to resolve them before you begin rewriting. It addresses common questions such as: How do I revise a novel without feeling overwhelmed? How do I edit a nonfiction manuscript structurally? What should I fix first in my first draft? Use the SCOPE approach to develop a clear, focused revision plan before you dive into your next draft. Act One: Read Act Two: Plan Up next: Rewrite CREDITS Cover Image by ChatGPT Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 30: Three Acts of Revision, ACT I, Read
02/16/2026
Episode 30: Three Acts of Revision, ACT I, Read
Your first draft is done—congratulations! Now comes the next big challenge: revision. But before you start tinkering with words or rearranging sentences, it’s time to step back and see your manuscript the way a reader would. In this first episode of The Three Acts of Revision mini-series, we focus on Act One: Read. You’ll learn how to approach your manuscript with fresh eyes, avoid the temptation to edit too soon, and capture the insights you’ll need for a powerful rewrite later. Whether you’re writing fiction or nonfiction, this approach will help you find both the strengths worth keeping and the gaps that need attention—without judgment, pressure, or overwhelm. CREDITS Cover Image by ChatGPT Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from Stamp Sound Effect by from LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 29: Frame Your Story With the Right Point of View
02/09/2026
Episode 29: Frame Your Story With the Right Point of View
In this episode of Write, Writer, Write!, attention turns to point of view—the invisible framework that determines how a story is experienced. From intimacy and distance to access and restraint, this conversation explores how narrative perspective shapes what readers see, feel, and understand. If you’ve ever struggled to decide whose story you’re telling, or how close the reader should be, this episode will help you think like a filmmaker and choose the right camera angle to capture your story. CREDITS Cover Image by ChatGPT Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 28: All The Voices on Your Page
02/03/2026
Episode 28: All The Voices on Your Page
Ever wonder what voice really means for writers? In this episode of Write, Writer, Write!, Deborah Froese lays three distinct layers of voice side by side—author voice, narrative voice, and character voice—and separates them from point of view. You’ll hear how these layers connect, where each one tends to show up most clearly, and why voice can change depending on the kind of work you’re writing. CREDITS Fingerprint Image by from Notify-4 SFX Sound Effect by from Graphic character portraits generated by ChatGPT Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 27: Make Your Message Unforgettable with Fiction
01/19/2026
Episode 27: Make Your Message Unforgettable with Fiction
Have you ever wondered what makes certain stories linger or why others spark change? If you have something you care deeply about—a question, a conviction, a truth you want to explore—this episode is for you. We look at how a message gains power when it’s carried by characters who make choices with a cost. When you trade narrative explanation for action and consequence, you give your audience an experience with real-life resonance. CREDITS Cover Image by from Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from Heart Image by from LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 26 Find Your “Why” and Become a Purpose-Filled Writer
01/05/2026
Episode 26 Find Your “Why” and Become a Purpose-Filled Writer
SHOW NOTES Welcome to a brand-new year of Write, Writer, Write! with Deborah Froese—and an episode that begins with a deceptively simple question: Why do you write? Rather than leaning on resolutions or productivity promises for 2026, this conversation invites you to dig deeper and discover the purpose that keeps you showing up when inspiration fades and life gets busy. This episode introduces a new resource on Deborah’s Substack: Wonder Prompts, . Happy New Year! CREDITS Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 25: Follow the Friction
12/01/2025
Episode 25: Follow the Friction
In this episode of Write, Writer, Write! Deborah Froese explores how friction between characters—real or imagined—creates the momentum every compelling story needs. Instead of manufacturing tension through plot alone, she looks at how contrasting beliefs, desires, and emotional truths spark the kind of narrative energy that pulls readers forward. Through examples, reflection, and practical insight, she shows why following the friction leads to deeper, more resonant fiction. Write, Writer, Write! returns in January, 2026. CREDITS Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from Cover Image by from Static Sound Effect by from LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 24: Do Conditions Hijack Your Creative Flow?
11/24/2025
Episode 24: Do Conditions Hijack Your Creative Flow?
SHOW NOTES Write, Writer, Write! Episode 24 digs into the “law of conditions,” the way old fears can flare up when present pressures feel a little too familiar. Host Deborah Froese shares a snapshot from a demanding editing week—and how echoes of past deadlines still tug at her today. She also offers simple practices to loosen the grip of old patterns and steady your writing practice. CREDITS Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from Storm Sound Effect by from Meditation Video by from MANUSCRIPT MOMENTUM CHALLENGE One week remains in the Manuscript Momentum Challenge! Follow the weekly check-ins at or subscribe to receive them in your inbox. Find daily updates here: LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 23: What Character Development Reveals About Us
11/17/2025
Episode 23: What Character Development Reveals About Us
This episode of Write, Writer, Write! explores how character development reflects not only the people on the page but the writer behind them. Drawing on insights from Jordan Rosenfeld and Manuscript Momentum Challenge participant Katie Harbath, Deborah Froese looks at how the choices we make about character—real or imagined—reveal our values, assumptions, and emotional truths. She also shares how these qualities show up in her own work. The episode closes with a few reflection questions to help you discover what your characters reveal about you. CREDITS Cover Image by from Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from “CHARACTER” ARTICLE LINKS What Makes Character Voice Memorable: Emotion by Jordan Rosenfeld Character Development: Building Myself at 45 by Katie Harbath MANUSCRIPT MOMENTUM CHALLENGE Official registration for the challenge closed on November 6, but don’t let that stop you from following along and joining the community conversation. Follow the posts at or subscribe to receive them in your inbox. Find daily updates here: LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 22: Feeling Stuck? Here’s How I Got Writing Again
11/10/2025
Episode 22: Feeling Stuck? Here’s How I Got Writing Again
When your writing practice stalls, the blank page can feel like a wall. In this episode of Write, Writer, Write! host Deborah Froese shares her first-week experience in the November Manuscript Momentum Challenge and how returning to pen and paper helped her rediscover creative flow. Learn what neuroscience reveals about handwriting, why it invites deeper connection between body and mind, and how even modern authors still rely on longhand to awaken their imagination. Slow down, tune in, and find out what happens when your hand moves just a little slower than your thoughts. MANUSCRIPT MOMENTUM CHALLENGE Official registration for the challenge closed on November 6, but don’t let that stop you from following along and joining the community conversation. Follow the posts at or subscribe to receive them in your inbox. Find daily updates here: CREDITS Cover Image by Image by from Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from Handwriting Video by from Typing Video by from Computer Blue Light Video by from NEUROSCIENCE RESOURCES Audrey Van der Meer and Inge Van der Weel, “Handwriting but not Typewriting Leads to Widespread Brain Connectivity,” Frontiers in Psychology 14 (2023): Article 1219945, . The University of Tokyo, “Study shows stronger brain activity after writing on paper than on tablet or smartphone: Unique, complex information in analog methods likely gives brain more details to trigger memory,” Press release, March 19, 2021, . LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 21: Take the Plunge and Figure It Out as You Go
11/03/2025
Episode 21: Take the Plunge and Figure It Out as You Go
Do you ever promise yourself you’ll write tomorrow—and then tomorrow never comes? In this episode of Write, Writer, Write! Deborah Froese explores the Law of Adaptation—the truth that momentum grows from movement, not from planning. Discover how adaptability fuels creativity and carries you farther than waiting ever will. IT'S NOT TOO LATE TO JOIN THE MANUSCRIPT MOMENTUM CHALLENGE! This free challenge began on November 1, but registration is open until November 6. If you register by then and follow the challenge guidelines—including weekly commenting—you’ll be eligible for one of three complimentary 10-page manuscript reviews. Sign up here: CREDITS Cover Image by from Theme Music: Together by Swoosh Sound Effect by from Star Image by from Time Travel Sound Effect by from Space travel Video by from Moon Video by from LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 20: Five Common Barriers to Growing Your Writing Practice and How to Move Past Them
10/27/2025
Episode 20: Five Common Barriers to Growing Your Writing Practice and How to Move Past Them
Do you ever promise yourself you’ll write tomorrow—and then tomorrow never comes? In this episode of Write, Writer, Write! Deborah Froese explores five common barriers that keep writers from developing a steady, satisfying practice. From time and energy depletion to perfectionism and loss of purpose, you’ll find practical ways to meet each challenge with self-compassion and curiosity instead of judgment. JOIN THE MANUSCRIPT MOMENTUM CHALLENGE! Find out the details . It begins on November 1, 2025. Forget perfection. Promise you’ll show up, stay steady, and build momentum, because that’s how you’ll grow as a writer. The challenge is free, and you have the opportunity to receive one of three reviews of up to 10 pages of your writing. CREDITS Music: Together by Timer Video by from Swoosh Sound Effect by from Buzzer Sound Effect by from Wire fence Image by from LET’S CONNECT! |
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Episode 19: Writing Nonfiction Part 3 – Shape Your PATH Forward
10/20/2025
Episode 19: Writing Nonfiction Part 3 – Shape Your PATH Forward
SHOW NOTES The final episode in the three-part series, Writing Nonfiction, helps you craft your book's introduction. The introduction is more than a starting point; it’s a promise to your readers. Using the PATH framework—Problem, Answer, Trust, Horizon—find out how to shape an introduction that captures attention, builds credibility, and sets the stage for everything that follows. Shape a beginning to your nonfiction book that inspires confidence and compels readers to keep turning the pages. JOIN THE MANUSCRIPT MOMENTUM CHALLENGE! The begins on November 1, 2025. Forget perfection. Promise you’ll show up, stay steady, and build momentum, because that’s how you’ll grow as a writer. The challenge is free, and you have the opportunity to receive one of three reviews of up to 10 pages of your writing. CREDITS Cover photo: Image by from Music: Together by Sound FX: Sound Effect by from LET’S CONNECT! | Episode Resources Atomic Habits: An Easy & Proven Way to Build Good Habits & Break Bad Ones by James Clear When: The Scientific Secrets of Perfect Timing by Daniel H. Pink Tiny Beautiful Things: Advice From Dear Sugar by Cheryl Strayed
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Writing Nonfiction Part 2: Build Your Blueprint
10/06/2025
Writing Nonfiction Part 2: Build Your Blueprint
In Writing Nonfiction Part 2: Plan, host Deborah Froese reveals how planning saves time, sharpens focus, and turns inspiration into direction. You’ll explore key nonfiction structures—from problem/solution to memoir—so you can choose the one that best serves your purpose and reader. With a solid outline and the right balance of story, research, and insight, you’ll write with greater clarity, confidence, and flow. Need some motivation to start writing? Check out the 30-day . It begins on November 1, 2025. Forget perfection. Promise you’ll show up, stay steady, and build momentum, because that’s how you’ll grow as a writer. The challenge is free, and you have the opportunity to receive one of three reviews of up to 10 pages of your writing. CREDITS Cover photo: Image by Image by from Music: Together by Sound FX: Sound Effect by from LET’S CONNECT! |
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Writing Nonfiction Part 1 – The Heart of the Matter
09/29/2025
Writing Nonfiction Part 1 – The Heart of the Matter
Show Notes In this first episode of a three-part series on nonfiction, Deborah Froese explores why writing nonfiction matters—for you and for your readers. Discover how to clarify your purpose, define your audience, and uncover the stories that bring your nonfiction book to life. Episode Resources To learn more about the Developmental Story Matrix mentioned in this episode from its creator, Kellan Fluckger, check out his book The Story Arc: Practical and Persuasive Magic for Authors, Speakers and Product Creators or join his next five-day Dream It, Build It, Write It Challenge ( ). If you seek extra support for your nonfiction book, Indigo River Publishing—where Deborah serves as an executive editor—offers the Six Figure Book Business Coaching Program. For details, contact . A Gift for You! If you want to establish or strengthen your writing practice, check out Deborah’s 30-day Manuscript Momentum Challenge ( ). It begins on November 1, 2025. Forget perfection. Promise you’ll show up, stay steady, and build momentum, because that’s how you’ll grow as a writer. The challenge is free, and you have the opportunity to receive one of three reviews of up to 10 pages of your writing. Credits Cover photo: Image by from Music: Together by Sound FX: Sound Effect by from Let’s Connect! The Fully Human Writer ( )
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See You Soon!
08/18/2025
See You Soon!
New episodes of Write, Writer, Write! are in production for the fall. In the meantime, check out the previous episodes and let us know if you have any feedback or suggestions for this work in progress.
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Episode 16 Bonus: Customize Word Styles
08/11/2025
Episode 16 Bonus: Customize Word Styles
In this bonus episode of Write, Writer, Write! host Deborah Froese shares how to customize Word Styles to personalize your manuscript and set it up to meet industry standards. Want to see how it’s done? Check out the YouTube version of this episode for step-by-step visuals: .
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Episode 16: Word Works For Writers
08/11/2025
Episode 16: Word Works For Writers
Are you a Word nerd? If not, it might be time to reconsider. In this episode of Write, Writer, Write! host Deborah Froese dives into some of Microsoft Word’s best features for writers. From Styles and Navigation to Track Changes, Comments, Dictation, and more—Word offers tools that can simplify your process and sharpen your writing. Whether you're polishing a novel or prepping a manuscript for submission, Word can streamline your workflow and free up your creative energy. Want to see these tools in action? Watch the YouTube version of this episode for a step-by-step visual guide: .
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Episode 15: Read These If You Write
08/04/2025
Episode 15: Read These If You Write
In this episode of Write, Writer, Write! host Deborah Froese shares a handpicked list of writing books that have shaped her creative journey—from mindset-shifting classics to practical guides on story structure and craft. Whether you’re feeling stuck, building skills, or seeking creative inspiration, these books offer support, insight, and the occasional “aha” moment to help you along the way. Tune in for a rich blend of memoir, theory, how-to, and creative philosophy. And yes, every book mentioned is listed below, so you can explore at your own pace. POWER YOUR CRAFT WITH THESE BOOKS Writing Mindset The Artist’s Way: A Spiritual Path to Higher Creativity by Julia Cameron Big Magic: Creative Living Beyond Fear by Elizabeth Gilbert The Creative Act: A Way of Being by Rick Rubin Creative Calling by Chase Jarvis The Heart of Story The Hero with a Thousand Faces by Joseph Campbell The Storytelling Animal by Jonathan Gottschall Story by Robert McKee Save the Cat Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody How-to Guides On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft by Stephen King Stein on Writing by Sol Stein Bring Your Writing To Life Rivet Your Readers with Deep POV by Jill Elizabeth Nelson The Emotion Thesaurus and the Writers Helping Writers series by Angela Ackerman & Becca Puglisi
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Episode 14: How You Live is How You Write
07/28/2025
Episode 14: How You Live is How You Write
In a world obsessed with word counts and productivity hacks, it’s easy to forget that good writing doesn’t come from constant grind; it grows from a well-tended life. In this episode, host Deborah Froese explores six ways to live authentically and fuel your creative voice. From embracing emotion to finding stillness and trusting life’s timing, this is your invitation to live deeply so your stories can too.
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Episode 13: Shift Your Focus – Stop Writing to Keep Writing
07/21/2025
Episode 13: Shift Your Focus – Stop Writing to Keep Writing
Writing nonstop doesn’t make you a better writer—but shifting your focus just might. In this episode of Write, Writer, Write! your host Deborah Froese shares how creative momentum often comes when you step away from the page. Whether you’re reading, daydreaming, or just noticing the world around you, these non-writing moments are part of the process. Put down your pen. Your words will thank you. What fuels your writing life when you’re not writing? Tag @deborahfroese on social and join the conversation.
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Episode 12: Why You’re Not Writing (and Why It’s Not Your Fault)
07/14/2025
Episode 12: Why You’re Not Writing (and Why It’s Not Your Fault)
Are you blocked It's NOT your fault! Writer’s block has nothing to do with laziness or a lack of discipline, and just because the words aren’t flowing doesn’t mean you’re not a writer. Most of the time, a block to creative flow results from emotional signals and protective instincts rising below the surface—sometimes linked to past experiences or unconscious fears. In this episode, your host Deborah Froese explores five common reasons for writer’s block, how they show up, and how you can gently move forward without feeling as though you're letting time pass you by. Power up your writing skills, mindset, and impact with veteran editor and writer Deborah Froese on Write, Writer, Write! www.deborahfroese.com/ https://bsky.app/profile/deborahfroese.bsky.social www.instagram.com/deborahfroese
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Episode 11: The I-Can-Fix-It Trap
07/07/2025
Episode 11: The I-Can-Fix-It Trap
Trying to finish your first draft? Don’t get caught in the I-Can-Fix-It-Trap! Discover three common pitfalls and a few simple ways to avoid them. Fuel your writing practice by honing your skills, mindset, and impact with veteran editor and writer Deborah Froese on Write, Writer, Write! www.deborahfroese.com/ https://bsky.app/profile/deborahfroese.bsky.social www.instagram.com/deborahfroese
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Episode 10: Whose Voice Are You Listening To?
06/30/2025
Episode 10: Whose Voice Are You Listening To?
In this episode, host Deborah Froese tackles a challenge every writer faces: the relentless voice of the inner critic. Whether you’re working on a blog post, a book draft, or a podcast episode, those internal doubts can be paralyzing. Deborah unpacks where that critical voice comes from, why it exists, and—most importantly—how to work with it instead of against it. You'll learn how to reframe harsh self-talk, connect with your intuition, and move forward with curiosity and compassion. If self-doubt is keeping you stuck, this episode offers the mindset shift you need to get back into creative flow. Follow Write, Writer, Write! to develop your skill, mindset, and impact as a writer.
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Episode 9: Draft Like You Mean It!
06/23/2025
Episode 9: Draft Like You Mean It!
Ready to power through your first draft? Before you do, spend a little time planning your approach and set yourself up for success. Because a blank plan leads to a blank page. Join Deborah Froese for seven steps you can take to draft like you mean it. Don't miss the next episode! Follow Write, Writer, Write!
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Episode 8: Novel Planning Part 6 – Prompt Your Way Forward
06/16/2025
Episode 8: Novel Planning Part 6 – Prompt Your Way Forward
Using eight simple story prompts, longtime editor and story coach Deborah Froese shows you how to establish a simple but focused shape for your novel—and at the same time, discover all kinds of potential subplots. Follow Write, Writer, Write! to uplevel your skill, mindset, and impact. EIGHT STORY PROMPTS 1. Your hero does this each day in their ordinary world. (Beat 1: The Hook.) 2. Until something happens to disrupt life. (Beat 2: The Inciting Incident.) 3. They try to cope by doing this. (Beat 3: The First Move.) 4. Something blindsides them and complicates the situation. (Beat 4: First Blindside.) 5. Which makes them realize something important. (Beat 5: Realization Dawns, the midpoint.) 6. So when another blindside sends them spiraling . . . (Beat 6: Second Blindside.) 7. They hit their lowest moment and then rise, gathering all their resources. (Beat 7: All is Lost.) 8. They face their antagonist and resolve the situation. (Beat 8: The Final Showdown)
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Episode 7: Novel Planning Part 5 – The Grand Finale in Act III
06/09/2025
Episode 7: Novel Planning Part 5 – The Grand Finale in Act III
So you captured your readers’ attention in Act I, delivered the action they craved in Act II, and now you’ve reached Act III. How can you deliver a grand finale that satisfies readers and lets your story resonate long after your book is closed? Your conclusion creates the impression readers walk away with. In this episode, 25-year editing, coaching, and writing veteran, Deborah Froese, provides a few pointers to ensure your closing act seals the deal. Be sure to follow Write, Writer, Write! for more insight into writing skill, mindset, and impact. EPISODE TRANSCRIPT Hey, writers, talk about plot twists. Just as I was wrapping up the Novel Planning series a couple of months ago, tech chaos struck and wiped out my recordings. My laptop came back from repairs at the same time I was heading out of town. I got to spend two weeks wrangling two adorable preschoolers, and that part was fun. But I got hit with a nasty bug—and then an unexpected series of rush projects overtook my schedule. So yes, it's been a minute. Thanks for sticking with me and welcome back for a closer look at Act III in the Novel Planning series. (Intro Sequence) Hi, I'm Deborah Froese. Today we'll continue our exploration of story form with the two segments of act three that bring your novel to a close. As usual, we'll take a look at , Lessons in Chemistry, and The Kite Runner. Third act demands are every bit as high as those for Acts I and II. They're just different. Readers may come to your book craving the action delivered in Act II but Act III is what they've been turning pages for. What happens to your hero? How do they resolve the situation? How can you conclude your story and leave readers feeling satisfied? The best stories have readers closing the cover while carrying the story and your characters with them. Act III begins with Beat 7. All is lost. This is your hero's lowest moment. They think they've given everything they have and they're struggling. But something happens to make them dig deeper. They face their deepest fears and give it one more try. In The Hunger Games, Katniss and Peter run to escape Cato, the only other tribute left standing, but he barrels right past them, chased by a pack of monstrous, wolflike creatures. They need to deal with the wolves before they can deal with Cato, but if they can beat Cato, they'll win. In Lessons in Chemistry, the reporter who interviewed Elizabeth for life magazine quits his job after his editor mangles his story and ruins Elizabeth's reputation. He sends Elizabeth a copy of the original article, but the truth doesn't do anything to end her despair until a friend from Calvin's past helps her realize that she will only be happy if she pursues the life she really wants. In The Kite Runner, Amir locates the orphanage where Sohrab was sent, but he's too late. Sohrab was sold to a Taliban official. Amir tracks the official down and arranges a meeting. And it turns out the official is a Assaf, the same Assaf who violated Hassan and tested Amir's loyalty when he was a boy. Now we come to Beat 8, the final showdown. Here is where your hero confronts the antagonist for the last time. A quick wrap up follows, and the story concludes with a glimpse of your hero in their new world, their new state of normal, forever changed by whatever journey they've been on. In The Hunger Games, the creatures snatch Cato first and tear them apart. It takes so long for him to die that Katniss ends his suffering with an arrow. That means Katniss and Peeta have won, but they're too weak to celebrate. The Capital, their real enemy, switches gears again. It retracts the two-winner rule, which means Katniss and Peeta are expected to fight each other to the death. Infuriated by the Capitol's manipulation, Katniss divides her stash of poisonous berries between her and Peeta. The audience sees this as a threat of double suicide. It's a potential romantic tragedy. Their deaths and games with no winner would publicly humiliate the Capitol. So before they can eat the berries, the Capitol switches gears again and pronounces them dual winners. The story concludes with Katniss returning home. She won the games, which means she and her family will now have resources. But her pretend romance with Peeta has grown complicated with real feelings and lots of questions. She's angry at the Capitol for its cruelty and manipulation, and fully aware that her defiance has made her a symbol of rebellion against it. This particular ending meets the tricky needs of series writing. There's no greater turnoff for readers than a disappointing finale, or one that forces them to delay gratification until the next book. You can leave readers with a hook, but you can't tear their guts out. While The Hunger Games conclusion obviously doesn't resolve all of Katniss problems, it provides a satisfying close to her initial problem: surviving the games. She's home again in this new world of Act III, and for the moment, she's safe. At the same time, her realization that she's become a symbol of rebellion opens the door for the next book in The Hunger Games trilogy. Brain science tells us that readers turn the pages seeking a reward, so don't withhold that reward just to bait readers into buying your next book. Wrapping up your story satisfactorily should be your primary objective. Believe me, if the first book is well done and populated with unforgettable characters, you won't need to persuade readers to pick up the next installment. In act three of Lessons in Chemistry, Elizabeth tells her audience she's leaving the show to pursue full time research. A Hastings lab secretary invites her to a job interview. Naturally, she's a little apprehensive, but she accepts. She meets the investor who had financed her previous research with Calvin, and the investor turns out to be Calvin’s mother. She gave birth as an unwed teen from a wealthy family. They told her that her baby was stillborn and sent him to an orphanage. When she discovered the truth, she spent years looking for Calvin and a way to get to know him. And now, surprise, surprise, she's Hastings majority shareholder. She fires Elizabeth's old boss and gives his job to Elizabeth with all the resources she needs to continue her research. She achieved her goal of becoming a scientific researcher and became so much more along the way. The icing on the cake? She finally feels as though she belongs. In The Kite Runner, Amir protects Sohrab in a moment that defines his true transformation. He stands up for something and someone he believes in, with no regard for himself. Assaf beats Amir senseless, but before he can kill him, Sohrab takes careful aim with a slingshot and strikes Assaf in the eye. In doing so, he rescues Amir from a bully just as his father had done decades ago. Amir and Sohrab manage to escape. Amir is committed to bringing Sohrab home with him, but the process is so fraught with challenges that Sohrab attempts suicide. When they finally make it to California, Sohrab remains withdrawn. But Amir is persistent and patient, and he shows Sohrab the love and support he had longed to experience as a boy. One fine spring day, Amir takes Sohrab to a kite fight. When their kite wins, Amir runs to claim the last fallen kite for Sohrab, just as Sohrab’s father had run to claim the last fallen kite for Amir so long ago. And so The Kite Runner comes full circle in this beautiful way. And there you have it. The eight beats and segments of a three-act story form. Act I draws readers into your protagonist's ordinary world. Act II provides them with the action they're looking for as your hero adjusts to a new situation. And Act III leaves a lasting impression for readers to walk away with a vision of your hero living in a brand new world. Planning your novel requires a lot of thinking and a lot of juggling. If you're averse to detailed planning, remember understanding the rhythm of story form is far more important for initial drafting than knowing all the details or planting them in just the right place. Leave that for future you and future drafts. If you know your characters well and pay attention to the emotional resonance of your beats, you can usually feel your way through the initial draft without getting tangled in logistics or structural analysis. Of course, some projects are naturally more complex than others, and it's hard to move forward until you solidify the details. For example, my now out-of-print novel Out of the Fire is framed around a young burn survivors recovery. It has multiple subplots concerning mental, physical, and emotional healing that don't occur simultaneously, so I had to plan in greater detail. I charted a healing timeline for each aspect of recovery and coordinated it with other plot elements. Remember, whether you work with a detailed plot or prefer beginning with only general objectives in mind, there is no right or wrong way to write, only the approach that works for you. Now that we've covered all eight beats and you have a stronger sense of story form, I'd like to share a super simple approach to outlining your novel by responding to a series of story prompts. Here's the juicy part. Doing so gives you a high-level overview of your story, and at the same time inspires a lot of potential subplots. You can use this approach to start building your story whichever way you prefer to write. Curious? Join me for the next episode and the final installment in the Novel Planning series. In the meantime, pick up a new novel or maybe an old favorite, and see if you can locate the eight story beats holding it together. If you want a refresher around those beats, check out the show notes for episode four. Thank you so much for joining me again today. Until next time, enjoy that novel and Write, Writer, Write!
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Episode 6: Novel Planning Part 4 – Deliver the Goods in Act II
01/27/2025
Episode 6: Novel Planning Part 4 – Deliver the Goods in Act II
Act II is sometimes referred to as “the maddening middle,” and for good reason. It covers 50 percent of your novel, and it's where the bulk of story action takes place. It's time to deliver the goods, the action readers crave. In this episode of "Write, Writer, Write!" find out how breaking Act II into four segments makes it easier to keep up momentum and satisfy your readers. Follow Write, Writer, Write! to improve your skills, mindset, and impact in just 10 to 12 minutes per week. Save more time of your precious time for writing.
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Episode 5: Novel Planning Part 3 – Hook ’Em Hard With Act I
01/21/2025
Episode 5: Novel Planning Part 3 – Hook ’Em Hard With Act I
In this push-botton age, readers expect instant gratification, so give it to them! In Novel Planning Part III, Deborah Froese takes a close-up look at Act I and the two beats that will lure readers into your pages, hungry for more . . . or tempt them to close the cover. Follow Write, Writer, Write! for concise tips and insights so you can spend more time focused on craft.
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