518: Inside the Application (Part 4): How to Know if You’re “Almost Done” with Your College Application
The College Essay Guy Podcast: A Practical Guide to College Admissions
Release Date: 10/08/2024
The College Essay Guy Podcast: A Practical Guide to College Admissions
Hi friends, and welcome back to the podcast. This one’s going to be short—and honestly, it’s an episode I didn’t think I was going to record. Why? Well, if you’ve been following along with Cassidy’s journey over the past year, you know we’ve covered a lot: from brainstorming her personal statement, to revising her supplements, to weighing her college acceptances. And when we wrapped Part 5, I figured we could leave it there. I thought it might be enough to know she had some great options. Silly me. You wrote in. You wanted to know: Where did she end up? So here we are: the final...
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Hi friends, and welcome back to the podcast! Many of you have been following Cassidy, a current high school senior, as she navigates the college application process. We've walked through her brainstorming exercises, her personal statement writing, and her supplemental essays. And now, at long last, Cassidy has received her college acceptances. Rather than reading the email she sent me, I replied, "Hey, I know you got your acceptances. What if we do a live reveal on the podcast?" So, I genuinely don’t know yet where she's been accepted. Huge shoutout to Cassidy for agreeing to do this live!...
info_outlineToday’s episode is part four of our series Inside the Application. Ethan is joined by Cassidy, a current high school senior who is working on her college applications for the Fall 2025 term. Cassidy’s application deadlines are coming up, so Ethan and Cassidy check out what she has so far through a process called the “Almost Done” review. They discuss about, among other things:
- Where do things stand & how’s Cassidy feeling about the application?
- What values come through in each piece of Cassidy’s writing?
- Where do Ethan (and Cassidy) see opportunities for revision to bring more of herself into the application?
- And more
Stay tuned, as we’ll continue to check in with Cassidy to find out how her process went and what she ended up hearing back from colleges.
Cassidy is a current high school student going through the college application process. She lives in the Bay Area, loves ballet, knows a lot about Biology, and identifies as a “yapper.”
We hope you enjoy.
Play-by-play:
- 2:05 - How’s the writing process going for Cassidy?
- 2:50 - How much time has Cassidy been putting into her application lately?
- 4:50 - Does Cassidy consider herself a writer?
- 5:45 - What is an “Almost Done” review?
- 6:39 - What is a Values Scan?
- 8:55 - Reviewing Cassidy’s most recent draft of the personal statement
- 23:20 - Cassidy shares some of her activities list descriptions
- 34:35 - Highlights from Cassidy’s additional information section
- 38:25 - Cassidy’s draft of her “excitement for learning” essay
- 48:08 - Cassidy’s draft of her “roommate” essay
- 53:20 - Cassidy’s draft of her “community” essay
- 1:03:08 - Cassidy shares her short answer responses (50 words each)
- 1:12:55 - Ethan shares closing advice for Cassidy as she prepares to submit
- 1:14:20 - Final thoughts
Resources
- Part 1 of this series, Inside the Application
- Part 2 of this series, Inside the Application
- Part 3 of this series, Inside the Application
- Cassidy’s Supplemental Essay Doc
- The Roles and Identities Exercise
- How to Write the Stanford Roommate Essay + Examples
- A How-To Guide for the Short Answer Questions for Highly-Selective Colleges
- How to Choose a College: A Step-By-Step Guide
- CEG's College Application Resource Hub
- A List of Activities You May Not Have Considered Including—But That Count!
- What do colleges look for in students?